I'd say that its finished...
It you're talking about the character introductions not being finished, you should leave it the way it is, because the scetch animations thing has a good feeling to it. Good job, cant wait to see the comic.
I'd say that its finished...
It you're talking about the character introductions not being finished, you should leave it the way it is, because the scetch animations thing has a good feeling to it. Good job, cant wait to see the comic.
Lol, the second one saved it!
The first fatality, I was like "this movie is unoriginal and this first fatality isnt so great" But after I saw the second one, I laughed a little, kinda funny how you had that sound of the fight and her screaming go on for so long, lol.
Okay, now you have good artwork...
Now all you need is some sound, a storyline and a longer movie. Good luck!
Haha Wade
I never expected that to happen. But why did wade have to die. and everyone has to be a foamy hater dont they? All well, it was still good.
Everyone hate Foamy! lol.. ADN WAID MUSTE DIE.
Is it just me or....
was the entire movie really blurry?
Well anyways, the movie was too short and too many words. No real animation and its not fun to watch at all.
Thank u.. i made it a long time ago. Was my first animation and i've been working improving my skills, also i'm trying to return to newgrounds since 8 years of absence haha thanks for your words and forgive my english skills.
Very unique
Has that gothic poetry taste to it, but I still like it. Just ignore those people who say "EMO!"
Poetry flashes are rare but always unique maybe you can start a movement. ^_^
I'll try. Thanks for the support!
Looks like...
...you tried to copy off of Arfenhouse teh movie. But, no, it wasnt funny at all.
Very clever movie
But, it could use some work. For first, make a bit of a better story line. At first I was sayin to myself "wtf is going on?"
And second, you need to make the battles longer and more actiony, thats what gets all these other action movies on front page.
So, if you improve those two things, you'll definatelly be a success. Good luck!
Thanks alot!! ill try that!!
Compress your file
I dont know how many times I see a short little flash that Could survive, but its file size is way too big. And the movie was wasy too short. And if you have closing music, dont have the whole song play. That just makes a bigger file size and that gets annoying.
Sorry for that
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